Week 7 Story: The Pandavas Gang

Author’s Note: This story is based on the Mahabharata, taking place in The Himalayas. I have changed the story by placing it in the twenty-first century and turning the Pandavas into the Pandavas Gang.  The five brothers are the leaders of the Pandavas.  Their cousins and a rival gang, the Kauravas, claim they deserve to take over the streets (instead of the throne as in the Mahabharata) of the city Hastinapura in the kingdom of Kuru.  The Pandavas disagree...  This all leads to the events in The Himalayas story.  I also took some liberties in the build-up to the story.

The Pandavas Gang 

The Pandavas brothers could hardly remember a time without each other.  Yudhishthira, Bhima, Arjuna, Nakula, and Sahadeva could always count on the knowledge that their brothers were nearby, for they felt as if they were one.  They ate, slept, and fought together.  The brothers had the same friends, and they also had the same enemies.  It had been natural to take charge of their father’s gang once the brothers came of age.  They had taken it together, five bodies merging into one head that hoped to rule the streets of Hastinapura.

The Pandavas brothers had always been stretched against another’s back, familiar with the muscled hands that patched up gunshot wounds and knitted scars from knife fights, ready to compensate for the brother they knew tended to lean to the left when throwing a hooked fist, ready to take a bullet – knowing they were always safe when they were together.

All of that changed when Arjuna disappeared.

The brothers had entertained the rivalry of their cousins, the Kauravas, without much thought as children.  Nothing had seemed quite so real or serious then when they played with plastic pistols.  Once the Pandavas took over the gang, however, the balance between the boys who had been playmates in the schoolyard was disrupted.  The cousins became strictly rivals, and they too claimed to deserve the throne of Kuru’s city.

In the fight to gain control of Hastinapura, the Pandavas brothers had been ousted from the city.  Exiled with their shared wife, Draupadi, they escaped to the forest of Kamyaka.  At first, it had been okay.  They did struggle, but they were relieved to at least be together after all the bloodshed.

And then Indra called Arjuna to his celestial city.


The brothers were avid followers of the Gods, devout men who were studded with sins, but their first reaction had been panic.  Yudhishthira gathered up his remaining brothers and pushed them north.  The gang went in search of answers in the Himalaya mountains.

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Comments

  1. Hi Lauren!

    I really enjoyed your story this week. It was concise and very well written. I like the spin you put on the original reading from this week. It is always interesting when someone takes the readings, and transforms it for more modern times. I think that gangs were a very appropriate application for these characters and these stories in the present.

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  2. Hey Lauren! I really liked how you took a new sort of spin on such a traditional story. I loved reading about the Pandavas, and so reading about them in "gang" form was both exciting and informative. From your style of writing, it was very easy for me as a reader to stay engaged in the story, so job well done! I can't wait to read more of your work in the future.

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  3. Hi Lauren! Nice story! It was easy to follow along with and had great information in it! I liked what you did with the original story and what you changed to make it your own. I am the youngest of five and us siblings always stuck together so I can relate to that! Overall, great story and I look forward to seeing more!

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  4. Hi Lauren! I like that you started your story by empathizing the relationship that the Pandavas brothers shared. Their relationship is one of my favorite parts of the Mahabharata. By building up that relationship, you really captured the audience's attention when Arjuna went missing! And it made me hate their cousins more! Basically, you did a great job with character building!

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  5. Hi Lauren,

    I loved reading through your story. You did a great job by starting your story with the relationship between the Pandava brothers. This provided a great footing for the character development throughout the rest of the story. It makes the reader feel much more attached to the story. Great job and I look forward to reading more.

    -Andy

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  6. Hi Lauren,

    You are a great writer. You really have a mix of both the original story of the epics along with your own make up of the story. You do a good job at telling your story too. It flows really well together and I can really imagine it. I like how you give the informations about the Pandava brothers just so there is background information and no one would be confused. Good job!

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