Week 5 Story: Waking Kumbhakarna
Waking Kumbhakarna
Author’s Note: My story is modeled after Pot-ear Awakened in Sister Nivedita’s Ramayana. I was really intrigued by the opaque coloring of Pot-ear or Kumbhakarna’s character. I use Pot-ear as the name others call him, while he prefers Kumbhakarna. He doesn’t appear to have much motivation for anything besides sleeping and eating. Sister Nivedita depicts Pot-ear in a way that molds him into a hunting dog. He only wakes to do Ravana’s bidding and in her version, he has no protests or doubts about the success of warring with Rama. There is a budding characterization of him, but it is mainly brutish and beastly. I am more interested in the psychology of Pot-ear as a character with emotion, which is why I wrote this story.
Kumbhakarna had been asleep nine months as if pretending to be a babe in a mortal woman’s womb, and he was reluctant to wake. Ravana knew, even as he impatiently sent many rakshasas to the cave where his brother dwelled, that the awakening of Kumbhakarna would be a difficult task. He understood not the lamentations that poured down his brother’s marbled cheeks, the whining wails that made the very wind pause to marvel at such grief-stricken sound, or the desolation that Kumbhakarna assured him was very much inconsolable. Ravana had little patience for this dramatics for he had a war against Gods and Men to win.
The rakshasas marched solemnly to the rocky home of their king’s brother, who they called Pot-ear. Perhaps it was because his ears seemed like giant pots hanging off the sides of his head, or perhaps it was simply a name which came forth without any reason at all. It did not matter for it was Kumbhakarna’s least favorite thing to be called.
They prepared a great feast for the giant for they knew that once he woke, he would be extremely ravenous. Deer were slaughtered, along with other meaty creatures, and tossed in great piles until it was a stacked mountain. It took a great deal of preparation and many of the rakshasas were tired after so much effort. And that wasn’t even the most difficult part of their task! No, for now, they had to wake a slumbering Kumbhakarna who had very little desire to be awake.
First, the rakshasas tried trumpets and conches, pounding on drums with their bare fists. Kumbhakarna only exhaled a gust of breath, sending a few brave enough to stand so close tumbling to their feet. They then tried to beat him awake, but their strength was no match for the snoozing Kumbhakarna. Eventually, after pouring hot water on his bare skin and driving elephants against his ribs, the great brother of Ravana awoke.
His stomach immediately reminded him of the pangs of hunger and Kumbhakarna lurched towards the feast. The rakshasas watched, trembling in their very bones, as he swallowed deer whole. It was a revolting affair to watch as Kumbhakarna slurped down the meats and rice. Once he finished, it was silent for mere moments, before Kumbhakarna let out a satisfied burp and began to lay back down. The rakshasas quickly intervened, yelling and jumping as they tried to keep him awake. Kumbhakarna grumbled, displeased.
“Whyyyyy? Why wake me?” Kumbhakarna groaned. With a greasy finger, he flicked one impertinent rakshasa off his cheek. He peeked between his lashes to watch the pest fly, soaring through the air and slamming into a tree. The rakshasa perched by his ear shifted warily. Kumbhakarna imagined he was preparing to bolt, eyes wide and knees knocking. Of course, Kumbhakarna knew there was only one who would send an army of rakshasas to his cave, only one who would dare interrupt his mourning over the pathetic squall of existence.
He knew he would do whatever Ravana asked, and perhaps even with vigor if it should prove the end of his miserable status as awake.
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P.S. Here is a youtube video of the rakshasas waking Kumbhakarna.
"Lets Pretend" -Kumbhakarna: Ummm excuse me? Why did you have to wake me up? I have much better things to do, such as dream about eating up some stupid peasants and slaying the so called mightiest heroes. It is a good thing that I have feelings for my brother (I hate the word love...) because if I didn't, there is no way that I would awake from my slumber without some consequences. Although, I do enjoy seeing every living body tremble before me in fear, so keep up the good work in painting me in such a marvelously true picture. Maybe next time you could even add in some stuff about my sword like teeth, the blood that drips from my fangs, or my ravenous claws that are always ready to snatch up my next meal. Well, goodbye for now. I have sleep to catch up on and souls to devour.
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren!
ReplyDeleteI just read your story, and I really liked it. I actually felt bad for Kumbhakarna. All he wanted to do was sleep. Then Ravana had his rakshasas do terrible things to him to get him to wake up. Pouring hot water and ramming elephants does not sound like a good alarm clock. Overall, I enjoyed the story. It is a unique perspective.
Hi Lauren. I enjoyed reading your story. You truly have a talent for writing. The things that they did to prevent him from sleeping was quite interesting. It reminds me of pranks that my roommates play on each other at night, but much less severe with my roommates obviously. Your story definitely offers the reader a unique perspective and I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDelete-Andy
Hi Lauren, I just read your story and I really enjoyed it! I can relate to Kumbkharna as far as him trying to sleep and everyone wanting to wake him. He knew who had sent to wake him and he had no choice. I feel so bad for him! Although, I am sure he enjoyed his feast after waking up. At least they had it ready for him once he woke up!
ReplyDeleteHey Lauren!
ReplyDeleteI once again must say that I really enjoyed your story! You have such a great way with words and can describe things in ways that are typically found in professional pieces of work. You have such a creative way of writing your stories and are quite witty. Once again, great job and I hope to be able to read more of your stories to come!