Week 10 Story: A Poem of Sita Stolen

Author’s Note: This poem is over the story of Sita Stolen from Sister Nivedita’s retelling of the Ramayana.  I wanted to capitalize on some of the images I saw in the original story, because Sister Nivedita’s language is very beautiful and descriptive.

Armed tooth and wicked brow,
ten heads rest on one shoulder
in mirror of the other.
A twenty hands reach out
with shield and all things of malice
made from bronze, silver, and gold.
Yellow bled red, eyes bloody instead
of hands which could be convicted
based on tint alone.

Disguised, a proper prayer
he does bear to the luxury
of stunning eyes –
            Oh, Sita,
            we beg you,
            be aware!

Sita, peaceful and besotted,
garnering her own palace
in the kingdom of beasts
waits in the forest
for the preying of the bear
upon the Golden Deer.

Oh, Ravana,
sealer of your own fate,
know not of the fruitless
struggle, taste the nectar
of your own rotting pit.

You carried the beggar’s bowl
and cared not for the beggar’s wisdom
in taking the bride of Rama,
the gentle thing who tames that Holy Beast.

The Gods rejoice in your downfall,
in your cursed desire for mortal pleasures
of something beautiful and intangible
for the stain of your hands
would paint her a deeper shade

as your tomb was made.

Image Source: RitSin

Comments

  1. Hey Lauren! What an amazing poem! You do an excellent job at making the words flow while helping me to envision what is taking place. The strong words and description are quite beautiful! I also wanted to mention that I really liked the image you chose to use, for this particular story but also for your entire blog! Every thing just move together so smoothly! Great job!

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